a redo of one of my first efforts
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a redo of one of my first efforts
this is going to be a redo of one of my first efforts about 3 years ago. I'm not going to look at the first one until I am done. I sure hope it is better. Stay home, stay safe, keep putting pencil to paper.
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PogArt-Ttoo
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Re: a redo of one of my first efforts
It's good looking so far.
Stay safe too.
Stay safe too.
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Oh, I love this so far! Looking forward to seeing updates!
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LindasPencils
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Lots to like here Rideum. Laws! All those legs! Have fun 
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Mike and others, would appreciate your comments. don't know why it's vertical.
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PogArt-Ttoo
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Re: a redo of one of my first efforts
So detailed...
Great looking all around to my unprofessional eye
To be honest every time and then if I see cows on any artwork, I'm trying to skip it... The same way I do regarding pigs, chickens, sheep ...
Don't know what's wrong with me?!
Anyway I love yours...
I can't explain it, but your drawing it's not simply cows, but great dynamics, hurry, some story tale and the noise that I can hear very well!
Wow...
Great looking all around to my unprofessional eye
To be honest every time and then if I see cows on any artwork, I'm trying to skip it... The same way I do regarding pigs, chickens, sheep ...
Don't know what's wrong with me?!
Anyway I love yours...
I can't explain it, but your drawing it's not simply cows, but great dynamics, hurry, some story tale and the noise that I can hear very well!
Wow...
*History isn't there for You to like or dislike. It's there for You to learn from it. And if it offends you, even better. Because then You are less likely to repeat it. It's not yours to erase - It belongs to all of us...*
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LindasPencils
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Re: a redo of one of my first efforts
That is a great work! I remember the first one I believe. This version seems to have more atmosphere and is less 'fussy' (working on memory - 3 years is a long time for me). You have captured a lot of tension in the herd of cattle. As Pog says you can almost hear the bellows of protest from those steers. The raised dust is great too.
Would you consider showing the two works side by side? It would be interesting to see your progression. But if you are not comfortable with that don't worry.
A really good piece.
Would you consider showing the two works side by side? It would be interesting to see your progression. But if you are not comfortable with that don't worry.
A really good piece.
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Help, why are they being presented vertical?
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Why are the presented Vertically?
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Oh yeah! Great improvement in my opinion! Great depth, atmosphere, contrast and lighting, and tells an interesting story. It’s such a complex subject and I admire the way you handled it so that the eye is well guided throughout. Sorry I can’t help with the orientation.
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