Thank you for the time to have a look at it Laurene

I'm happy everything else is pleased for you, but the belly...
At the moment it does looking harsh, there's three reasons.
1- my mobile camera increasing dark tones and white, ommiting the middles.
Can you see her very dark ear and the cheek?
They aren't as dark...
So the ribs aren't as obvious, because there's middle tone that balance the appearance.
2- Those belly part has been burnt harder, I was simply mapping the wey the ribs goes there, what direction/angle, and where they're start, where they're ends.
I did want to make myself the guides to follow...
3- Do you remember what I told you some time ago..?
The burnt places getting lighter few days later

The updates I'm posting straight after I finish the session.
Therefore looking at my updates you will see that those burnt places, lines, shapes are much much darker than they really are.
- because it's fresh burn
- because my camera increasing the dark tones and white.
The part of the belly is darker than on the top.
So I wasn't afraid to make those shapes of those ribs more obvious, knowing they'll be less noticeable in few days time, and after adding the shading over.
Also I wish to make them visible, because they are on my reference I follow...
She's stretched very much at this photo, the skin shows all those details of her bones underneath...
This stage of burning has not any fur on it yet.
I'm happy you are interested what's going on

Thank you very much.