I almost mentioned that earlier... but then I decided I really like the drawing as it is.JayS wrote: Mon Nov 08, 2021 6:33 pm The foreground trees on the left set the near distance. The trees behind the elk set the background. They should be lighter, and with less definition. As you are doing in this drawing. IF you made the foreground darker, it would give the drawing more depth.
But, I do agree. The mid-tones are missing, so there's little solidity, and that affects the appearance of recession.
So - with the understanding that I LIKE the drawing as it is - I think the over-exposed reference photo is at fault. When that's corrected (well, my version of "corrected")...
Now there's recession. The left-hand tree stands forward of the Elk; The Elk is dominant; and the trees and foliage degrade and lighten with distance. And I like the way those three left-hand trees lead my eye into the scene and directly to the Elk - and that nothing on the right-hand side is a distraction in any way - yet I can explore if I want to.